1  ***
2023-10-21 pm 2:36:00
174.--.97.59
Dear

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to discuss an issue regarding my child, ppp.

After the 5th period, ppp attempted to check the bus transportation schedule on the school's website. Due to some technical issues with the website, ppp had to visit the school office in person to inquire. Unfortunately, this led to ppp being a few minutes late for the 6th period. I noticed that this delay has been marked as an "unexcused absent."

Considering the circumstances, I kindly request a review of this absence and hope for a possible rectification.

Thank you for your understanding and assistance.

Warm regards,
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  ***
2023-10-21 pm 10:08:00
76.--.80.217
저도 밑에 어떤분이 한것처럼 위의글을 보완한 버젼.....

I am writing to discuss the issue regarding my child, ppp.
Due to some technical issues with the website,
ppp had to visit the school office in person to inquire about them.
I noticed that this delay had been marked as "unexpected absent".

영어실력이 매우 출중하시고 거기에다 인성이 바닥이 아니신 174님께서,
먼저 아래있는 저의답글을 한마디의 저의 허락도 없이 친절하게 바꾸어 놓으셨습니다.
아.. 구태어 단어까지 바꿀 필요도 없는데도 애써 수고를 해주시다니.. ..진심으로 감사드립니다.
그래서 제가 님따라서 님의글의 기본적.치명적 문법적 오류( 정관사. 전치사.시제등...) 포함
수정. 보완해 봤는데.... 괜찮으시지요?

  ***
2023-10-22 am 12:38:00
174.--.97.59
Of course it's fine! But there's not much to fix in my writing, right? Unlike yours, haha.

And if you're going to correct my writing, please do it grammatically. Yours was all wrong.
2  ***
2023-10-21 pm 5:13:00
76.--.80.217
아들 이라고 할께요.

Dear xxx,

I am writing respectfully to request you to reconsider the result regarding my son's
absence. My son, ppp had to visit the school office since he was not able to access the
school bus transportation website. He was a few minutes late to his 6th class and
has been marked as " unexcused absent "/ 'an unexcused absence".
I would be very grateful if you could understand the circumstances and change the
result.

Once again, thank you for the prompt action to this matter.

Regards,

Xxx
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3  ***
2023-10-21 pm 6:35:00
174.--.97.59
위의 글을 보완 한 버젼-I've corrected the grammatical errors and the parts that weren't natural.

Dear xxx,

I am writing respectfully to request you to reconsider the status of my son's absence. My son, ppp, had to visit the school office since he was unable to access the school bus transportation website. Due to this, he was a few minutes late to his 6th class and has been marked as "an unexcused absence."

I would be very grateful if you could understand the circumstances and amend the record.

Once again, thank you for your prompt attention to this matter.
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